There are still a few more stories from Moe that he wrote when he was in middle school, that I want to post on this blog. Stay tuned for more of his stories later this week.
In the meantime, while I was sorting through a box full of memorabilia - I found a poem that I wrote when I was a sophomore in high school, as part of an English assignment. At the time, I thought it was a poem full of mystery and intrigue, but when my English teacher read it to the class - they laughed!
The class thought it was supposed to be funny, which of course wasn't my intention at all. I was mortified!
It's only been 10 years since I graduated from high school (humor me) and reading the poem again as an adult, my opinion has definitely changed - it's pretty corny!
Here is the poem that I naively thought, would go down as the most riveting poems ever written:
"Nature"
with the moon giving light to the darkness.
Loving the perfume of nature .
Not far away.
Looking for a poor creature to eat.
I discover nature is not for me.
Note: It's funny but after I wrote that poem, I didn't like camping as much. Nowadays, my idea of camping is the Marriott Courtyard.
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7 comments:
I LOVE crumb cake. Delicious!
Your poem is awesome. I can totally see the class laughing when you announce that nature is not for you at the end. Kids are merciless!
Yummy crumcake! I love crumcake. Okay, I love any kind of cake!
You cracked me up with this post. I don't think it is that bad ... it sounds like a poem a young kid would write. You've inspired me ... perhaps I'll share my own childhood poem I wrote ... "The Mixed-Up Seasons" ... and actually submitted to Seventeen magazine. No Joke! It was rejected (of course).
First, can I have a piece of that crumb cake? Please? I sound like my kids begging now :) I enjoyed your poem and the pictures. Very vivid.
Awwwwwww, I like the poem, life is so pure when when we are young and uninhibited, but like you I prefer the Marriott Suites now!!!! Then crumb cake I think I will definitely will be making this! Enjoy your day, Diana
Well I certainly found the poem absolutely RIVITING.
I was moved. (tee,hee)
I too wrote "corney" poetry when I was a teenager. Sheeeesh, what a nerd I was.
I love it! LOL
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